well since this has inspired me to continue my character making rampage, time for a second shopkeeper oc!
This is my NGUAC KO submission! Whether I make it through, I found making this track very fun, was very happy with how it ended up.
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Lyrics
Passing through, or on your way?
Might you stay, I implore,
shall I guide you through the door?
Not every day
Do folks come this way
Sometimes it gets too stuffy
Sometimes I'm all alone
Take a look around
Tell me what you see
I know this place has seen better days
But has anything caught your gaze?
Need anything?
I'll be here, nothing to fear
I'm always near
My dear patron take your time,
I thank you for stopping by
A mother's touch
means so much
Lost her many years ago
when I was five years old
She left this shop to me
And I think It's quite funny
How I'm looking after it
Like she looked after me
Bugs collecting dust
Keep piling up and up
Soon they'll reach the moon
I know one day I will too
People come, people go
I stay close, it's all I know
Take a look around, is there anything that you fancy?
Need anything? I'll be here, nothing to fear, I'm always near
My dear patron take your time,
I thank you for stopping by
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Production Chronology - (Philippine Time, UTC+08:00)
~August 21 - wrote 1/3s of lyrics down
~Aug 25 - started song production
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Software used -
FL Studio (for instrumental)
Synthesizer V (for vocals)
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Plugins
vocals, early build if you will
well since this has inspired me to continue my character making rampage, time for a second shopkeeper oc!
well now there's two shopkeeps in town! have fun writing that oc
I like the bouncy piano riff at the beginning. The mix is full, clean, and well-balanced, and the sound design is refreshing. This is one of the most authentic-sounding vocoders I’ve ever heard - I thought it was a real person singing for a full 6-8 seconds. The conversational tone of the lyrics is really nice, too. Feels like this song is right out of a musical. The layered string/guitar melody at :51 complements the vocal verse perfectly, and the exposed percussion line at 1:08 does a great job of pushing the “reset button” on the song. The layered vocal line at 2:15 was a great way of adding closure to the piece - it feels like the level of attention to detail and passion for her work the shopkeeper is demonstrating is increasing as the song goes on. Really strong work here, Vermeen! You told a convincing story with this one, right down to the vocaloid. Keep it up! ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
9.75/10
thank you so much! i really did try to bring out a sense of playfulness with this track, i feel proud it shone through. while i don't quite expect to stack up against the veteran competitors in the finals, i'll come up with something i know i'll enjoy writing like i did with this.
This is meaningful and awesome!
glad it means something to you!
makes me feel nice and warm and welcomed. its amazing!
thanks for stopping by!
this is simply fantastic, the vocals, the lyrics, the instrumental... this is really beautiful, i love it to bits! :3
good luck with the nguac, youre def making it to the finals!
thanks a lot!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.