Sounds really cool! Careful with the distortion though, I'm assuming you did it on purpose, but too much of it can just sound bad and harmful to the ears.
I would also suggest you add more elements to the song like some cymbals maybe, there's not too much going on right now, but maybe that comes in a later section of the song? Can't really tell, right now this sounds quite unfinished.
Author Comments
Hello, Newgrounds! I've finally decided to post something I made on the Internet, even though it's more of a demo than a fully fledged song. I made this one and some other tunes for my project called The Nettles (for some reason I call it band, despite being it's only member) last summer, but only showed it to my friends. It was recorded in my home studio, which consists of my good ol' laptop with Audacity and Ableton on it, my cheap Strat plugged straight into the laptop's line input (the infamous Impatient Rocker tech) and MIDI keyboard. They don't call me Eenzayne for nothing, huh?! Anyways, this is the first time I'm sharing my creations with such a large and diverse community, and I'd love to hear from you, did you like it? (I sure hope you did, much love!)
Eenzayne responds:
Thank you for your feedback! I recorded this song as a part of a self-imposed songwriting challenge, where I had to record a track within a day, so it's more like me catching an idea than me executing the idea properly. I totally agree with your points though. Thank you <3
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 88
- Score
- Waiting for 4 more votes
- Uploaded
- Aug 22, 2021
- 5:00 AM EDT
- Genre
- Experimental
- File Info
- Song
- 3.1 MB
- 1 min 21 sec
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