I like this, but here are some tips: You should not turn up the volume of the entire song when going to the drops, just like you left it at the 2:49 drop, the other two saturate my ears a bit, but you can turn it up a bit with some instruments, and maybe adding low or high passes; and the melodies look (a bit) like they're in F # minor, though it doesn't sound quite so out of tune after all. But I loved that there was almost no repetition in the melodies and the song reminded me of another called Remember by ColBreakz & Vizzen, I liked it.
PD: The name of the song is quite similar to the lyrics of the last song I uploaded (Together) haha