omg teh bubbles
navij has a cool little loop like this too designed for some similar purposes. I like the echoing, floaty happy arperggios that remind me of bubbles. Not a lot of bassier melodies, which gives it a nice, gentle touch. What I think this could use is maybe some muffled, quiet pads in the background, and some muffled, heavily reverbed, industrial sounding percussion to make it sound like an authentic under water feel. But this a great loop once again!
I think if you added more variety it would be a better song. However if you have it repeat over and over again with only three basslines and one beat it's almost always going to sound sleepy, annoying, and overall kind of sad really.
It has the potential to turn into a pleasant piece but, right now it feels more like a quarter of a a song. The beginning, middle, and end are pretty mauch the same light, fluffy, dreamy and overall really not what I would call terrific
7/10, 3/5 for effort.
xcuse me sire but you maybe didn't see that this is a fuggin LOOP and not a full song
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.