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My submission for #NGUAC

Feedback is always appreciated

I don't think I'll make it past tryouts but whatever

Soon to be on spotify and all other major streaming services.

Also, I used Labs for the first time and i think its great, but in my opinion soft piano is overrated.


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Nice! I dig this!! What’s your spotify link? Would love to follow you on there.

Casper responds:

At the moment my spotify account is gone but soon it will be back up with hopefully most of my songs:)

Hello! This is a review for the NGUAC competition.

I've gone over one or two general categories of issues specific to your song, and one section of things I think also deserve complimenting. I prefer being very direct with my critique, none of it is meant to offend. Thank you for your understanding!

Constructive Criticism:

- Really, the biggest point of critique I have is simply that this is... so repetitive. This is clearly begging for some lyrics and/or a melody at a minimum, and in my opinion should also have a secondary section with a short bridge to vary it up. The second section after the breakdown deserves some more variation as well, seeing as it is exactly the same as the first more climactic section. Quite frankly, even the breakdown is just a filtered version of the same instrumental/sfx loop you have going the entire track, only removing the drums temporarily as well. It's very nice to chill out to, but this loop will get boring in a matter of minutes without further variation.

- Quite frankly, there's not enough content here in this for me to really critique much of anything else. If anything, the guitar slides used as SFX in the pitched loop are... odd choices, and I think there are definitely better ones, but they aren't actively bad by any means. Rather, they just sound a tad odd due to their length and application almost as a type of 'percussion' without being very percussive.

Compliments to the Composer:

- Honestly? While there isn't that much here in this track, it's a very chill groove and I happily left it on while writing out your review. It's calm, the little bent guitar notes and other sound effects felt nicely placed and enhanced the music. I really just wish there was a bit more variation and some kind of 'hook' to make it more than a background loop, because otherwise it's lovely and even well-mixed.

Final score: 7

I luv your sundtracks!!!11

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Listens
428
Downloads
4
Votes
9
Score
4.72 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 4, 2021
1:22 AM EDT
File Info
Song
6 MB
2 min 37 sec
Software
  • FL Studio
  • LABS
  • HalfTime
  • Morphine
  • Sausage Fattener
  • Vinyl
  • RC-20 Retro Color
  • Groove Machine Synth
  • Nexus 3

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