Прикол, это звучит как те песни что я слышал по радио в маршрутке. Очень непривычно слушать подобное вот так. ._.
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2023 update: music rebalanced to decrease volume of base, increase voc, and reduce vol of breaks
Three genres, Russian lyrics, breaking my computer
Most of the FX on my vocals wouldn't render LOL, too ambitious ig
Inspired by Russian classic rock, polka, and dnb
Russian is my second language. Probably made some amusing mistakes. Feel free to point those out. Translation below Russian text :)
Текст - Lyrics
Куплет - Verse
У меня новая рана, думаю не заживет
Вместо счастливого сердца, кулак на свой сассный рот
Пока в погоне за ветром, он сбил меня прямо с ног
Вот эта новая рана тащит меня в гроб
Припев - Chorus
Ты хотела меня ну, унижать - получилось, но я по крайне жива
и умела придумать все слухи слыхать - что случилось - мне/всем на срать
Куплет - Verse
ведь моя новая рана остро причинит мне боль
но совершенно напрасно, потому щас пошлю ее в дно
вот моя новая рана - не что стою я одна
вместо же белого флага, я поднимаю себя
(припев еще раз - chorus again)
Куплет - Verse
У меня старая рана, думаю что заживет
Вместо отверстия сердца - жена поцелует в лоб
Недавно она говорила, хотя сбила меня прямо с ног
потерпеть и все будет забыто, and that's all I need to know
(Припев 2 раза - Chorus 2x)
The quiet arpeggio after is Тебя забуду, я забуду, я забуду times two.
Translation
I have a new wound, don't think it'll get better
Instead of a happy heart, a fist to my gay/sassy mouth
While I was chasing the wind, it knocked me right off of my feet
This new wound right here will drag me to my grave (lit. a coffin)
You wanted to, well, humiliate me? Well you did, but at least I'm alive
And you were capable of thinking up all the rumors to hear - what happened - I/everyone doesn't care
See, my new wound sharply brings me pain
But absolutely in vain, therefore I will send it to the deep
Look, my new wound is not that I stand all alone
Instead of the white flag, I will raise up myself
(chorus repeats)
I have an old wound. Think it'll get better
Instead of a hole in the heart, my wife kisses my forehead
Not long ago she was saying, though you knocked me right off of my feet
Endure and everything will be forgotten
And that's all I need to know
(chorus repeats)
I will forget you, will forget, will forget
ADR3-N responds:
Я эту песню писала пока служила в армии и очень активно занималась преподаванием русского англоязычным студентам. Видно что отечественная музыка России вдохновила меня хаха
So, song is not bad overall. But personally I don't like this style. It's kind of a mix of village's songs (polkas for ex.) and metal.
Some mistakes were found but as you not native speaker: who cares? (If you want:
1. Sometimes gender changes in song (if I don't get sense right it's not fault):
"Пока в погоне за ветром, он СБИЛ меня прямо с ног" - words of a man;
"Ты хотела меня ну, унижать - получилось, но я по крайне живА", "вот моя новая рана - не что стою я одна" - women's words.
If I not mistaken the main hero is a man. So sometimes its sounds weird.
2. I think it's no use to put slang words like: "щас", "сассный", "насрать"; better will be normal equivalents: "сейчас", "красивый (idk)".
Yup.)
ADR3-N responds:
Oh, thanks a ton for taking the time to go through grammar!
For он I was referring to кулак hitting me in the face
The hero is, well, me, female. So I can see how it would be confusing for the average Russian speaker who probably doesn't assume a woman is singing about another woman -- and especially not with my voice, or being married to a woman because that's unthinkable XD
As for сассный, I literally meant the sissy, gay, ridiculous connotation, because I'm referencing being ridiculed for looking gay. The rest I probably could have written differently but my ability to rhyme in Russian is significantly less than that of English given it's my second language LOL
If this is the only issue with my writing I'm actually pretty happy with it. Thanks again!
This is lit! :D
ADR3-N responds:
Thank you times two <3
For going through the trouble to find this, and for letting me know about it haha
WEEEW I wasn’t expecting that DnB at the end!! It’s a bit too loud though, you might want to adjust that.
ADR3-N responds:
Yeah I was having all kinds of issues with the leveling. You live and you learn! I could probably back off the compression a tad and pull it down. The problem I had is there were so many instances of compressors that it started crashing. Will update you if I do indeed fix that :)
EPIS
ADR3-N responds:
Thank you <3
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- 3 min 27 sec
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