it's good

yuo, this one is very good, it is only on the short side again thoug. make it the next time 2 more minutes longer, that is much beter.
but fair is fair, you did a good job on this one
keep it up

Could have been better

I enjoyed your work of panning, it made my brain tingle. One thing I didn't like about it was the voice sample at the begining. It was to long, cut bad, and has little clarity to it. Maybe if the clip just "then he slipped" and then cut into the music. It is nice to hear voice samples in songs though, so keep up the work.

HERES JOHNNY!

And then he slipped and banged his head and blood strted jucing outta his forehead. Man it was sick.

Nice!

I loved the part about the dude hitting his head hahahahahah