Got a good thing goin

Its sounds nice. but the loops are obvious.

Nice build and beat.

Good variety.

Could have done more with sound levels. as you build try to fade out one of the loops to bring it emphasis.
And also it would have been nice to have a tune that made it flow.

Loops

If you're gonna use loops, please at least give credit to the people who created them. Some of the loops you used came from Lie-Lie-Lie by DJ Ozma, which was the theme song for the Naruto Shippuuden movie (which rocked by the way)

Great song, but it's a little repetitive, and you could use some volume adjustment

That's pretty kick ass

You should do some doom metal, like insomnium kind of
Like start out with a sorrowfull symohonic melody four measurs, alter it slightly four more measures with some metal drums backin it up, then bring in the distorted guitar =) just a sugestion

5/5 - 10/10