Listening to this track, I finally understand that the author is far from hopeless, and he is able to listen to other people's advice. In principle, you have learned to use plates, which is commendable. You also know about build-ups, and this is doubly pleasant. I also praise you for the fact that you know how to use the bass that you do in Serum. My only recommendation is still valid - sound effects. It would also not hurt to learn how to use them. And in general, the idea is very good, and the idea of combining dubstep and hard trance in one bottle is generally super! Deserved 9 points!