may wanna have another go with this one.

The main beat sounded pretty bomb but then you brought in those bells and it just threw everything off.. Its just a practice so i understand what you mean.. I add demo's all the time to see what people think so keep on it man ! i'm rootin' for ya!

Hmm...

You can do better, I know you can.

Next time, take it slow, less conflicting instruments, just stick with one tune, and keep playing with that one tune, but go back to it over and over, so it's actually a collective song that people will remember.

hm.

but the drums were not the main thing i noticed. I was listening to all the other instruments like those discordant bells which were good. Well if its just for your practice with drums, you get um, 7. For the rest of it I give you 9. Just automate a few more envelopes?

UMMMMM.......

I LIKE THE INTRO DRUMS BUT THE REST IS SOMEWHAT WIERD TO ME BUT THEN RE SUPPORTS AT 2:11...I THINK YOU SHOULD STICK TO THE ORIGINAL KICKS AND SNARES....