What I suggest is getting someone to rap to this, something of the nerdcore variety. Maybe about the experiences of a college student using the dorm's washroom? It's up to the eyeballs in potential.
4/5. Keep making music.
The beat does sound funny as if you are going to some washroom. What a silly song :P
O.K I guess but...
I know you think this is your song but it's actually a loop song man I know all of these loops. If you put your own tune in with the loops that would be cool but you didn't.. I didn't really thinks goes together well any way but youl get there. Anyway I made up a loop song on garage band aswel you can check it out if you want.
I didnt know that going to the washroom was this intense
sorta freaks me out
Hmm, not sure what to say here. Some good use of presampled loops from garageband/logic. It kinda flowed well. I'm not a fan of using prerecorded loops, but you showed me that playing with loops can be fun. Not sure how you got washroom from this song. Anyway, umm good choice of loops. You get 5/5 vote and 8/10. I usually give 9/10 but loops docked one off, but really I'm sure the vote matters more to you.
Bye for now
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.