Liked it....

I like it well put together.

Not bad at all!

Its well made if a bit short, needs a little work then it could be a favorite!

Just needs some more polish!

I'm not a big metal fan, but composition-wise it's pretty well done in my opinion, and it flows like any good song should. The vocals seem to be conflicting with the guitar at times. I think you should try to brighten up the highs with an exciter or EQ of your choice. Other than that, very well put together, keep at it!