I liked the intro, nice soothing entry to what becomes kinda bad. The timing of the rock piece is off multiple times, and the hi hat seems to over power everything else. over all i like the idea of the song, but just a few fixes are needed. good work anyways :)
this isnt too bad! a few timing issues, but the sound is great. nice job! 5/5
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thanks! i love your stuff.