nice i liked it alot keep up the work ^^
Not bad for your second attempt!
Things I would recommend :
1. New VSTs, such as z3ta+, Nexus, Vanguard, etc.
2. New samples, such as Vengeance Essential Clubsounds Vol 1 & 2, Vengeance Effects and a few other packs you could find as well.
3. Learn your note composition. Learn how to create melodies using correct notes to a chord or scale.
You'll get the hang of it eventually. Check out www.serious-sounds.net , they have a ton of tutorials, tips, etc... Helped me a lot with stuff.
Pretty much the same
As your first song. You added a pad in there that added to the song, but not to the feel it had in the begining. Still looking for melodies. Anyway dude keep trying, its a long road ahead of ya.
I'll keep trying, thanks for the support!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.