Pretty epic. I'll give it that.
"I woke up, to see grandma’s face right in front of me. “Geez,” she said, “it’s about time.” I was confused. Did I sleep drive all the way to Illinois? Why don’t I remember driving? This hospital gown is kind of revealing and embarrassing. WAIT WHY AM I IN A HOSPITAL GOWN? WHY AM I IN A HOSPITAL BED? WHY AM I IN A HOSPITAL!? Grandma seemed to know exactly what I was thinking. “You were in a car accident, honey.” I was? Is my computer okay? Did I total my car? My beautiful car! IT WAS SO YOUNG!!!! “Where is my computer?” I asked after a very long off topic thought train. “I have it right here.” She handed it to me. I booted it. “Takes a lick and it keeps on ticking,” I said. I opened the AI I programmed, and showed it to grandma. Her eyes welled up, “That’s a cute picture of your mom and dad. Oh, and look at your adorable brother!” What? “What?” I asked. I turned the computer to me. The AI was frozen. Suddenly my computer started giving me a heat warning. It was chilling at a good 249ºF and rising! Oh no! I have to turn it off. I pressed and held down the power button, but I heard a loud pop. The laptop sizzled away. The screen eventually went dark. I slowly closed the lid and started to cry. I held the still warm laptop in my arms and bawled my eyes out. Grandma came and hugged me."
Pretty epic. I'll give it that.
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