Advice.

Take out whatever melody that is in the beginning and that sound completly out of this song (wang wang wunng)...it ruins this song. It has potential, but you just aren't getting that club feel with this song. I could never imagine this in a club. Something you have here to keep in the future is the elctro synth and melody that comes in at 13 seconds. Your drums are decent, but need work...Im giving you a 9/10 because it looks like your a beginner, remake this song when your music becomes more professionly put together and it can be a success. Have fun... check my stuff out if you want. Id recommend checking in a week if you do, havn't sumbitted any of my new songs ive been working on for months....thanks hope you take this advice