The instruments are neat here, reminds me of Lycoriscoris. I would say add a lot more bass to the kick and maybe have a bassy percussion if you're going for that sans-bass type track. For those clackity percussions I would add some stereo width to the high end. Also, I would try to give those pads some warmth through some saturation plug-in; it would really give it that in-your-face type vibes.

Other than that, the track has a lot of potential; the melody and drum choice is great. Maybe in the future consider doing a VIP of this.