I can tell you one thing: for a hard trance, this is very good. The only thing is that my requirements for you don't change much. You need to work a little on the dynamics, add various EDM effects, plus segments before the drops and put some fills in the transitions to the other parts. You can make them yourself, it's not difficult. Plus, you still lack the brightness of the sound of the drums and you also need to reduce the instruments. This is to impose space on them (reverb and delay), saturate them, equalize (required!), distort, compress, and so on. Keep this in mind for the future. 7 points so far, great job.

Wow! Pretty nice Dance song!