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AI Afal

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A sprite made for my visual novel: Advocate's Lai.

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The idea is quite nice though i'd like to make some opinions

- Try making her fingers look connected to each other ( because it looks chaotic in there )
- Try making her equipment like a gauntlet that extends to her elbow
- Try making her look a bit curvy ( she looks like a plank )
- Give her chest-piece more details
- Give her straight hair instead of curly ( It might make her look more futuristic )
- Try giving the apple on her head more details ( Ex. make it look like a Crown )
- And try experimenting on face anatomy

Youkos responds:

This is actually the most simple form she takes. If I actually manage to get everything I want done in the vn, she'll probably have alternate and more refined-looking appearances. (She's supposed to look on a plank -cough cough-)

Thanks for the comment though~

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Sep 11, 2014
12:49 PM EDT
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