The idea is quite nice though i'd like to make some opinions
- Try making her fingers look connected to each other ( because it looks chaotic in there )
- Try making her equipment like a gauntlet that extends to her elbow
- Try making her look a bit curvy ( she looks like a plank )
- Give her chest-piece more details
- Give her straight hair instead of curly ( It might make her look more futuristic )
- Try giving the apple on her head more details ( Ex. make it look like a Crown )
- And try experimenting on face anatomy