Eh? Its not bad but I think the girl drawing is better but i like your style its just to messy and unrefined. Also it would be better if you were to use guidelines but you don't have its a recommendation. If you you find that to complicating and hard don't do it I get why it is since there are many ways to do guides and it is time consuming. I can tell you have talent kid don't let people pull you down alright. If you work hard and let people who want to help, help you, you can become an artist far better than me got it. So keep it going and JUST DO IT!!!