I really like short comics like these that leave you hanging on the edge of what even happens next for the characters presented. I really enjoyed seeing that struggle Yae has between being annoyed at her family and trying to (or at least look like she does) care about them. It's fascinating to see how Ken doesn't seem to share that sentiment at all, and it was a really nice read. Your posing and inks read really well!
As for the warehouse interior, I think it's a good complement with how there's a minimal amount of tones being used on the characters. It's balanced really well by how the characters are in all white, and I don't think they stick out weird or anything. All in all, very good work!
