less draw marks so its less sketch craft looking. make the lines outlineing her more... defined, less jumpy. i get the fall motion marks but they need to be more slim and less outling also making the them show more than 1 frame of falling would improve them. also why are there circles on each finger tip its distracting. besides those things it is a good picture.
Hey, thanks for the advice, I'll try and impove on that in my other work. it is something Ive noticed.
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