ummmmmmmmmmmm this taste like egorator! What's next, you're going to leave Newgrounds and start a Let's play channel?
EGORAPTORS BEEN ALL OVEEERRRR DISSS
AWWWWWW diz luks like Egoraptorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I see that you were trying to emulate Arin's style, and that's good for experimenting or just for having some funz, but honestly it just looks like a cheaper version of it, if people wanted to see Arin's style, they would go to Arin, unless you add your own touch to it, you know, take whatever you like the most about his style and combine it with other things that you like about other styles... i don't know.
Apart from that i don't think the pose is working really that well, i think she is very unbalanced, with the sword adding to that. Usually running poses are unbalanced, yes, but you would expect her to be trying to balance herself a bit when carrying such a huge sword, she looks like she's falling, i can't picture where she would step next with the sword in the way. Also the colors, while in Arin's they look kinda like these, there's something that doesn't make them work like in Arin's, wouldn't be able to tell you what, though.
Sorry if this felt like i thought too much about it but i'm in sleepy zombie mode and i just felt like doing it, hopefully you get something helpful out of it, Newgrounds lacks a serious amount of critical reviews.
Great work on the perspective and sense of movement.
The colour choices are really unique and do a wonderful job of grabbing your attention :3
Hey thanks very much! I was actually very happy with how this pose came out.
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