The line art and cel shading look great, but the character on the left feels a little awkward/flat compared to how clearly 3-dimensional the char on the right is with how the hair and dress flow. I think a slightly more dynamic pose could help remedy the mismatch in stiffness. Other than that, I really like the shapes you used for the hair and dress, it adds a lot stylistically.
Voltz and Daydream (Commission)
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Commission for @Trodx2000 on Twitter of their characters Voltz and Daydream
Unlimited-Edge responds:
Thank you for the critique! I agree, the person on the left was a bit flat and stiff, I really should have tried to rotate her more counterclockwise towards the person hugging her, I drew her at a more 3/4 angle when it should have been facing more towards the other girl.
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