This is a good beginning for a web comic. It shows a well developed character in only a few lines. This is also well designed too. The only problem with it was a small error that I seen and that was when your main character said, "he left mom an me..." and you didn't put a mark after an which should look like this an' making it the word and. Unless you meant it to be that way. Anyway it looks like it will be a great comic.
good call on the punctuation, bad enough I use crazy phonetic spelling I have to have bad punctuation as well. Thx for the props too!
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