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I wish I knew how to render better ;w;

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Hey my dude! I like the composition & the linework for the floorboard c:

Some critiques I have for this:

- I feel like your work would heavily benefit with more consistent & slightly thicker linework, especially for the character on the couch. Work on more confident strokes (it helps with more smoother lines).

- The anatomy of the character could also use some work, perhaps consider looking up references on how hands look like when holding a phone or resting on something!

- As for shading, soft shading can work! I just think you need more diverse dark & lighter values in your color palette, & to study more about light source <3

Keep it up! Best of luck!

K I’md ansksk $&$

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Oct 16, 2021
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