Not sure who this guy is and what his lore's about, but I like his design, although I have no clue what's going on with his bottom lip. Looks like it's supposed to be melded into his torso, which is an odd yet distinct detail.
The way you drew 2X13 in the first page makes it look like he's stepped out of a comic book, especially with his pose. Gives an intimidating feel most would expect from an EXE.
The second page, in particular, I like a lot. I feel it adds more to the comic book vibes of the first page by bearing a semblance to those intense action scenes, where the villain is facing the camera whilst unveiling some master plan or bombshell's worth of cruicial information. The second page could also be formatted into a cool desktop wallpaper, too.
