You made it real hard on yourself using a setting under water, since water refractes when it hits the water. This makes it so that it seems like the ocean is almost glowing when your close to the surface yet be utter darkness the further down you go. however you did a great job highlighting her hair from the surface lighting without making the rest of her to dark or filled with shadows where there should be none. however this version seems slightly less clean than the version on deviantart, which is a shame since here you can't tell that you actually used the refracted light on her skin. which might I add looks marvelous. The DA version makes me feel like she really is underwater. Keep up the great work,