Like the character and your style, but you should work on the story and the typos/grammar for sure.
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Character: A lazy dude with ''lots of potential'' as his mom puts it. Often refuses to really try unless nesecary. That goes for naming too considering his power is ,,awsome flame fists''(his fists set temselves on fire, witch can be used in different ways, self explanotory). He tries to act cool in front of strangers, but has a softspot for everyone he knows.
( sorry for typos btw)
Trashmourt responds:
Typos, yeah. If i ever make anything i need some naitive speaker to double check. As for the story, the character are carying it. Kinda like cave story, simple premise, but the charactrs and undertones make it feel complete. I won't make this comic in atleast 5yrs since my skills aren't where i want them to be yet, but i am very greatful for your advice, messege me privatly if i misunderstood anything.
I feel like you could explain the concept and character in a better way, but the art is still good
Trashmourt responds:
Noted, i'll try my best. ( i'm not a naitive speaker) thanks for advice, and reading it too!
Looks like a JoJo character
Trashmourt responds:
Y' wanna say it looks awsome or lika a copy. (i didn't take inspiration from Jojo so i don't know)
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