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Colouring in the BG is very week, sorry.
Date Compeleted: November 09.
Lack of colour
Is what is killing you work. VIBRANT!!! We want VIBRANT!! or some colour theme. No more "just white". Ok? You draw manga you say? Well, (this is just my opinion) your eyes, slightly too big. Needs more of a nose, and well... shading. Shading. Manga artists don't really colour to much, so if you're bad at it, I don't care. You need some shading to finish this up, as well as geting rid of all that white.
My colouring pencils don't do viberant, and neither does my scanner.
I had the whole thing coloured in blue, but the scanner murdered it. Admittly it was weak to begin with hut the scanner dosn't help.
Meh, I don't use that title anymore. I never liked it much anyway.. Manga is too awesome and I relised I prefar the more americanised stuff anyway.
I avoid those eyes, they don't work for me. The just sorta SPLAT across the face =/
Thanks for the critiques =3
I'll bear them in mind in future. If you know any good brands of coloring pencils it would be appricated, the ones I have a really weak.
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