Notbad
A very unique piece here, So this was notbad at all, I like this style of drawing it is black and white but thats one of the things I like about it, and I think you could ad some slight subtle color to it but honestly you have enough detail it may not need any color, but some color might be a plus.
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you should make more of these types and such.
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