A shirt suggestion i made by silverflame on Newgrounds

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A shirt suggestion i made

Hello my fellow newgrounders i decided to try to make an interesting shirt with some doodles i made and heres my result i will try to color it myself but i would be glad if someone who is used to color with metalic colors and can make this better than i did =) well thats all folks ! have fun :P

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Jazza

2013-07-17 02:14:42

For a beginner you're doing really well, keep doing what you're doing and keep yourself motivated and you'll see improvement comes quite quickly! This piece is decent, it effectively conveys what you are trying to go for, so good work. The linework is in need of improvement, nothing major, it just lacks solidity in areas and is a bit rough. Keep up the effort, and thanks for sharing your work with me!

silverflame responds:

Woa :D thanks Jazza for this hoinest and truly nice critique i have just begun taking up painting and trying my best to pick up my english a little more but its hard thou even thou i use it as much as i can it can still be hard to explain what i want to say correctly. As my writing and spelling skills isnt so good as they used to be a few years back. I will still try to use it more.

I know i shouldn,t ask for revivews from you but i wanted to at least try to get an awnser to perhaps pick my motivation up even more to continue drawing even thou it feels hard i know that if i want to become as good as i want i must learn and let it take time.

PS. Thanks again for making this review. You made me Really happy that you took YOUR precius time doing it. IF i can help you in any way just send a pm To me and i will help you as best i can.

// Mathias

Gawayno

2013-05-16 12:02:29

Great design! Though I'd suggest using a comp-based shirt to see how the design would work for the t-shirt.

Overall, an amazing piece of design.

Keep up the good work!

silverflame responds:

Thanks for the revive and it is being worked on and well it may take a while becuse im adding mor details and adding lights and colors but also learning new ways to use the tools in photoshop as i progress XD this is my most worked concept yet XD