Different

So this was pretty different I can see a few changes for the better I'll start with the background it could use some work maybe some texture or something and the green element on her head could be more neon green more bright more illuminating but those could be some small changes that would really push this piece over the edge

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few changes that could work

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A hearty piece! Interesting character design, and slick/detailed line work, though the character looks a bit... strained? Surprised? Distressed? Wonder how I should read that expression hmm. Nice design overall, and strong colors and contrast too.

-cd-