Nice! I was hoping for a bit more close-up detail on this one, and you've delivered. The ephemeral qualities really stand out now, and it's much easier to make out the words themselves. I really like your subtle touches here, like how the words circle the heart on the left. It actually looks like the words coming out of the subject on the left's mouth are trying to wrap around and tug at the heart of the other.
It still feels incredibly sweet and sad to me; that sense of forlorn melancholy is quite pervasive.