Very nice work

And here was some nice work and some really nice effects and such just like with the hair being transparent that was a nice touch and never seen that done before. Would be nice if more artists did that more but anyways it was a nice effect. I love that you put two different colored eyes that was different I think you can have these eyes really glow cause that would really make this piece unique and different ofcourse but as for that it will take some updates and I hope it's something you can pull off cause it's a really nice effect but anyways nice job once again gotta check out more of your work

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Some glow on the eyes would be a very nice touch

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A nice sketchy, though what an apathetic expression! It's not so much the line of the mouth, but the weary, sketchy, line-work around the eyes, and the blank gaze, that seems to convey such a profound tiredness. Maybe the blankness of the face and hair too - no shading or detail. It looks good though, if that's the impression you mean to give.

-cd-