Your loose style is nice, and I like how you put so much wind in her hair. Maybe the flora in the back should be bending further, since this wind must be pretty strong.
I'm a bit puzzled on her pose. Is she sticking out her bum while standing straight or are her legs spread? (with most of the weight on the left leg and the right stretched out)
It feels like that line for her spine on her lower back should be more to the left.
Also it looks like she's holding that pole pretty loosely, while I imagine it should be a firm grip.