Love this piece
This one is ok. I like it, but then I don't. Mainly because it's too dark. You can't really see what's going on in the picture. My suggestions are to add a source of light somewhere. Maybe in the room, in the corner, or make the view outside the window a little more brighter so it would appear that the light was coming in. Other than that it's a really good picture
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Wish there was more lighting effects with the window or somewhat light up more.