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0.00 / 5.00

Aug 6, 2013 | 5:00 PM EDT
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1086 x 2053 px
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third picture Ive drawn for newgrounds, pretty much 3rd picture ive drawn in general.
Please comment and leave feedback so I can get better!
Im here for you advice and recommendations!



Rated 3 / 5 stars

One thing you really need to work on is proportions, and symmetry. Have you ever tried using a wooden doll to use as a guideline for drawing? If not, and you intend to draw humans, it might be a good idea to invest in one, or find a digital alternative, as it helps out a lot, believe me.

Second, you're being a bit too generous with the shading, tone it down a little, I know it seems to add a bit more depth, but some of the places where you're using it, it would have looked a bit better if you held back just a little bit.

The hair needs a bit more work doing to bring it to life a bit as well.

One place I'd recommend checking out for brutal in depth criticism is which is the art critique board, but before you go there, keep in mind, they will rip into your work, so if you don't handle criticism very well, I'd try and avoid it at all costs.

Anyways, I hope I've been some sort of use, PolyVerse, and good luck improving upon your work, I apologise that I couldn't give a more in depth view on it, but I'm not exactly the most talented person around, when it comes to being a critique.

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