Interesting
Well this was an "INTERESTING" piece here there is a "DEEPER" msg here it seems the wording represents that, As an idea here maybe this whole view screen could be larger in some way or form and you can ad even more elements of your idea within the extra space, just a small idea to throw your way, you have a nice visual point here and some deeper mesg, anyways this was nice work.
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As an idea here maybe this whole view screen could be larger in some way or form and you can ad even more elements of your idea within the extra space
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