could do a lot better. i guess you have much to learn (and i can teach you a few things if you want). i don't mean that in a passive-aggressive sense - if you're young, it's good to experiment, but don't treat this as a final resting spot for your skill.

i have a feeling the jaggies on the curves are due to the limitations of m$ paint, and that you didn't choose those but just settled with them instead as if it wouldn't add anything to the art. you specifically mentioned m$ paint, but i wonder if you use anything else.

i take it you thought of a hot day on desert road with hanging power cables nearby while listening to the song you that mention in the description, but to me it smacks of 70s design more than anything else. i don't think that's what you wanted. please correct me if i'm wrong.

but i do see that you wanted to pull something off with the radiating ellipses in the top two corners. try it again.