Hmm, this was a good picture. I'm just kind of confused about its purpose. Is it supposed to be some commentary on the character? I'm fairly certain it's him as an adult. The face looks the same way though. I found the background to be rather good.
I like how his name is spelled. It makes little sense, but is a good picture. I guess you were trying to make him more realistic, maybe? I'm glad it didn't come off as gross. Molly's a good name.