Wow...
Art Critiques are so... lets say... simply mean... You give pics I think are good 0's and people give you 0's even people who have pics that I think are good. Honestly even if proportion is slightly off or if the hood looks messed up... these are really stupid reasons to drop a score from 10 to 0. This isn't bad... I think it was done quite well, but maybe you should allow more creativity... poses are nice and all, but add foreground... and background... 8/10