Well, you've got an interesting style. I like the rat character, pretty clear what their personality is like. Finn Hardwolf also, kinda random but kinda Bojack Horsemaney. What exactly happened when the shopping cart fell over was kinda unclear. There was also not really an ending punchline at all and the other rat just kinda disappeared. You need to clean up your art a bit and try having some kind of punchlines.
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OFTENLICKEDNEVERBEAT responds:
Understandable, the last 2 panels are pretty unclear. It was done as a quick doodle, my other art is hopefully more clear. and its a possum not a rat. Basically it was a kind of homage to this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8xHrTbRA0XQ. It was initially a request for this nerdy possum character "spaghetti'ing" or having an awkward moment when seeing a mildly famous person.
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