hey yo bro, i think u should make things more sleek,
like uve made the hair fluffy, shirt baggy, and pants all tent-looking, and the hands all big and bloate
i think u should try making more body fitting, and like more physics laws abiding shirt and hair,,,
also u should add shadows to ur art, it looks an unnatural level of 2D
and work a bit on anatomy and proportions,,, if u would like i could give u a roughly edited version to give u an idea of what im talking about,,,
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NocturneReverie responds:
thanks for the feedback~ while i agree i do have issues with anatomy proportions and it iss something im getting better at. as well as the lack of shadows which is very helpful advice, as i have been feeling my drawings been fairly flat
as for the physics breaking/baggy clothes are partly due to 1. This character particularly being chaotic in every regard, having morphing/moving features and details to give an aura of unease from just looking at them, and 2. A stylistic, cartoonish style i've developed and have grown comfortable with
i appriciate the comment and offer and will carry this advice with me going forward, thank you!~
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