So, some of my friends gave me a bit of advice on how to upgrade this drawing and the result came out so great i couldn't stop myself from publishing it, however i don't know how to add a second image on one same post (If anyone who sees this knows how to do it pls tell me :)). So instead i'm doing a 2nd post to show the improved version (and the original one will probably stay as a sketch).

So uhhhhh hope you like this!