I really love the style,
contrasted bright neons is a wonderful pair for A BROWNISH ORANGE?! how delightful light conscience.
The page it self bleeds and cries to go to the next set of lines and contrast.
the pastel texture does get a little digital though, i wish there was a better way to connect those fragments more smooth around characters eyes, and clothing detail outlines.
I give 4, because i'm a critic, :0