Its really good for a paper drawing and the coloring is really clean and nice to look at but its hard to read it when the picture's sideways and youre holding the picture. All you need to do is take a picture of the paper up close and by itself, then rotate it so we can read it better. And you might want to add a work in progress piece so that you dont get disqualified.

That is actually decent! For a paper drawing, it´s great!