OK, this right here is a great redraw for a couple of reasons.

1. Love that you added the more robotic looking text box, always a treat when someone uses that.

2. The emphasis on Metal Sonic's red eye glare makes for a more menacing glare, enhancing his overall presence.

3. The way Sonic's body is shown to have slight movements made such as having his legs move seemingly in a circular pattern as if he's kicking the air in a struggle to his quills curving in a downward motion from being held up, as well as showing a bit more concern in his expression.

And finally...
4. The background being fleshed out with more dust and dirt being blown from the deck of the ship as hard wind is blowing up from the gigantic fans, and oh yeah, the fact that Metal is literally holding Sonic up to the air!