While I do feel that your work has some ironing out in terms of anatomy and technique, mainly because I feel like you could have gone with out the dithering in this case and left more space on the forehead, for what it is you actually made a pretty solid piece and I think you do have the potential to grow as an artist.

So I'm gonna go out on a limb and give you a chance to get scouted. But if there is one thing I will say is that, you should consider seeking feedback on your work.