looks good just not sure about the big black area under the ribs =)
other than the background, It's still a pretty good drawing otherwise!
I'm with redandrew here, the background is a bit distracting here. A solid color one would've worked here with a cool character design that's a bit busy. Or like a silhouette of buildings or something simple!
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